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Elizabeth Grace Martinez's avatar

oh wow. this is so beautiful and heartfelt. i can feel the emotions coming through.

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Thank you, Elizabeth.

I write poetry to make the reader feel something so your comment means a lot.

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Jenn Morrill's avatar

I enjoy the melancholic tone of your poems, Harun. They’re beautiful.

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words, Jenn. It truly means a lot to me.

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Odinakachi Nwonu's avatar

This is beautiful. Made me sad but what’s a few drops of tears in the face of beauty?!😂

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Odinakachi Nwonu's avatar

This is beautiful. Made me sad but what’s a few drops of tears in the face of beauty?!😂

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Harun Kewa's avatar

I’m happy that it made you feel something. Ultimately, that’s the point of art, to make others feel something.

Thank you for your kind words, Odinakachi.

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Camille's avatar

Great work with extending the metaphor 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Thank you so much, Camille!

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Revathi Ganesh's avatar

For all my efforts, I can't deny that,

without your sunlight, your radiant,

elegant, beautiful and powerful light,

my bed of flowers do not look the same.

These last portion hits deep though it sounds lil melancholic!🫠

How profoundly true it is!🥹#notallflowersaresame

Nobody can replace anybody!💫 Each of us are unique🦋 in our own light!🌈

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Couldn’t agree more. We are all unique.

I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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Messy and Meaningful's avatar

Brava! Beautiful poem. You inspire me to release share some of my poetry here as well 😊

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Go for it, Tiffany! I was hesitant to share my poetry at first but I’m very glad I did.

Thank you for your kind words.

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Bansi Pattni's avatar

Beautiful! 😊

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Thank you so much, Bansi!

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Raphael Koller's avatar

Beautifully written

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Thanks a lot, Raphael.

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Thank you!

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Harun Kewa's avatar

Thank you 🙏🏾.

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