If Ever

[Tinashe D. Ndhlovu]

This is a great read my friend

[Harun Kewa]

Thank you so much, buddy!

[Paul Wittenberger]

You've managed some nice end rhymes and internal rhymes, Harun. Write more!

[Harun Kewa]

This is mighty praise coming from yourself. I will!

Thank you, Paul!

[Daniel Catena]

A sense of nostalgia in every line. Simple yet descriptive. Loved it, Harun!

[Harun Kewa]

Thank you for your kind words. I’m glad you enjoyed it, Daniel!

[Daniel Catena]

My pleasure, it was a great read.

[Bansi Pattni]

So beautiful! 😊

[Harun Kewa]

Thank you Bansi! ☺️

[Elizabeth Grace Martinez]

this is sweet <3

[Harun Kewa]

I’m glad you liked it, Elizabeth! ☺️

[Ingrid Haring-Mendes]

Love it!!

[Harun Kewa]

Thank you so much, Ingrid!!

[Yolanda Valdés]

Beautiful, Harun! ❤️🙏🏽